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hey, check this out.

http://rapidshare.de/files/19925000/Sample_Of_Ur_Song.mp3.html

its like a clip of what i'm working on and wanted some critics or sugestions to improve it.
lyrics ARE there but havnt been added yet.
the part where the clip ends has a solo after it which i'll post in a while
NOTE: i will make this whole song again from sctarch (plz ignore the buzz, hiss or handling noises)

the song is titled 'learn to smile again' (till now)
its about coping with crap and stuff.
i thought i've done a pretty gud job and wanted ur opinion.


thanks