#1
well it took a little longer than i hoped to get this up... i was just lazy i guess. haha.

i didn't do vox this time because i kept screwing up. i kept squeakin like i'm still in puberty or something. which, that could very well be. lol.

fyi, i had to try the intro over 120 times. that was so hard to do for some reason. stupid harmonics. but i got it.

check it out. dmusic is still in my sig. lol.
#2
As I listen to it,

A couple of Dead Harmonics in the intro
Same for the last in the verses
Chorus, pretty well in most places, a few mistakes but nothing overly noticeable.

Overall a good job, only real critsism is the dead harmonics, if you were unable to hit it cleanly it may have been better to play the root note instead.

Check out my Snooker Theme Tune if you get time.