#1
Hey. Well i dont really do sad songs, but i thought it worth the try. Im all crit for crit!! so any crit would be fantastic.

Feeling good and bad at the same time
I wish this duty wasn't mine,
But hey, it's for a friend of mine.
Problem though - the words won't come out
Its not like me not to scream and shout
Silence fills my lungs
Air fills my head
Release my spirit and let me be dead

Let me crash,
Screw the break,
Pray the lord my soul to take
It must burn,
It must end,
Nobody but the pain's my friend!!


On i fly through the glass
And so my time has come to pass
And my car, it explodes,
and scatters me across the roads
now dread fills my lungs
Fear fills my head
release my spirit and let me be dead
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I'm now an official Franzaholic.


Meep is a word.
Use it.
#2
Forgot to say, its AC/Dc style =)
Quote by calvinthecanadi
I'm now an official Franzaholic.


Meep is a word.
Use it.
#3
You also forgot to remember that Troy doesn't like bumping. You could've just edited that into your first post... you knew what you were doing.

*closed*
!troy!