#1
I wrote these lyrics after figuring out a pretty cool chord progression. The guitar set to this tune is kinda like the sound in Californication by The Red Hot Chili Peppers.
The lyrics I wrote are basically a true story.. :

The days are over
The days are gone
When I would stare at you
and wonder what it would be like
to be with you under the pale moonlight
It's just a surreal fantasy
That will never be true

I light up a cigarette
And think about you with him
it bothers me deep inside
but I know theres no way

So many loves, with so many bugs
It makes you wonder if it's all worth it
Then I think of you
There's nothing else to do

The Days are over
The days are gone
When i would stare at you
and wonder what it would be like
to be with you under the pale moonlight
it's a surreal fantasy
that will never be true

I'm still working and tweaking with it a bit. Any tips? please only constructive critisism...no bashing I plead.
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#4
Quote by kunvulshuns
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Thanks!
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