#1
Got bored and made a song.
Pieced everything together.
Did 7 different beats, each about 5 seconds long, pieced them together.
Got each riff perfect once, then pasted them to make a song.
Vocals I did in one shot, then pasted them.

http://soundclick.com/thezultones
www.myspace.com/thezultones

The song is "Industrial Accident".
#2
ok,......

quality is decent, guitars and drums should be turned up, vocals down. I understand that this is death metal, and I get that those kind of vocals are supposed to be indiscernable, but the vocals need to be cleared up a bit. Keep the growling though.

wow, thos talking voices are creepy, in a good way, did you sample them?

This was kickass.

check out my metal song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=356617
#3
Quote by GardenGnome26
ok,......

quality is decent, guitars and drums should be turned up, vocals down. I understand that this is death metal, and I get that those kind of vocals are supposed to be indiscernable, but the vocals need to be cleared up a bit. Keep the growling though.

wow, thos talking voices are creepy, in a good way, did you sample them?

This was kickass.

check out my metal song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=356617

Yeah, I had way too much gain on the vocals, I'll try and redo them soon.

Thanks, I found them on the interweb after a bit of searching.
#4
Theres some ideas there that you could expand on definately. Personally the vocal style really isnt to my taste at all, the guitars were very quiet but from what i made out there were some decent riffs. The sampled voices were cool but were louder than the actual music which wasnt so good, maybe they could flow into each other a little better aswell. as i said, definately ideas in there that you could expand on but at the moment i think theres definately room for improvement. Thanks for the crit by the way
#5
Those vocals ARE Creepy I like them, well not because I like this kind of music but because they creep me out. Sweet song.
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