Playing isn't bad. was a little unfluid at points but not that bad. I didn't really like the vocals that much. They didn't really sound right. Overall I would give it a 7/10
The overdubbed lead was a little to staccato, try to make it more fluid and legato, ad some slides and hammer ons, its to plain.

Vocals sound off pitch, and they are extremely quiet.

Crit mine, its in my Sig.
yeah i was thinking hammerons and pulloffs would make it smoother, vocals could be a pitch or two higher, good song though, could really make a good full song of it
Originally posted by SuicideKing
.... so wtf is an emo? is it like an emu only rounder?