#1
Desecration

Desecrate your grave,
You peice of ****,
Brutalise your life,
Leave it in peices,

Chorus
Gonna drag you down,
To hell,
Burn mother****er,
o' You'll burn well,

Tear your heart,
Right out of your chest,
Take my bite,
'N' leave you to the rest,

Chorus

I'll unleash my demon's,
Onto you,
Break your spirit,
Sap your soul,
'N' drain yu life,
Gouge out your eyes,
And leave the pulp,
To the flies.

Chorus

For my Death Metal Themed band...
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#3
/bump
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#4
omg bumpin hell y doesn't anyone reply on this forum!
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#5
Hey man I like your style of writing, more demonic and angery sounding. I am a big fan of death metal myself.

Tear your heart,
Right out of your chest,
Take my bite,
'N' leave you to the rest,


I really liked this part, just sounds incredible. I can almost imagine this part as like a chant with some heavy melody behind it. But that probably isnt what it is.

Anyway good job. Also if you have time, you think you could crit mine. It is called Demoralizing Touch

Anyway awesome song.
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