#2
Different from a lot of acoustic recordings I hear. I like it. The lyrics are pretty straightforward, which I usually wouldn't like, but they fit the song so well. My only complaint musically is there seems to be one chord you use for pretty much the whole song (that may be wrong, I have my volume pretty low at the moment), but it's not terribly repetitive, and I don't think the song would be the same without it, so I'd probably just leave it in.
This is a song that I think an entire band could really do something with, I was already hearing the other instruments while listening to the song. I don't think it stands too well with just an acoustic and vocals, so you might look in to that.
Good job!

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