Here is a poem about a girl that drove me crazy and well I dont know what happened. This is my first poem on UG. I just needed to get it off my head. Crit please.

Your hair was the color of the sand on the beach
Your eyes were blue like the lucious waves
I just wish I was riding inside that wave
But Im stuck just thinking about this B**ch
Everywhere I go theres something that reminds me of you
When I look out the window theres a reflection of you
I called but no answer
The last time we talked you said "You cant talk right now"
I just wish I never met you
You drove me mad