#1
Well i finished it and decided to change the title (was all i need). let me know what you think of the title change and the rest of the song.
thanks

Little Dirt Path

Verse 1
Over the hill, down in the valley
A little dirt path, leads straight to you
It?s not so traveled, by many other
Persecution, lies in its wake
But if you?re strong, others will follow
You just need to, lend a helping hand
& Show that your heart is, like the others
Broken and shattered, on the ground

Verse 2
As I walk down, this little dirt path
All the others, continue to ask
Why I follow, without a guide
I laugh and say, it?s what I believe inside
I continue on, this little dirt path
Picking up strangers, along the way
They?re not quite sure, what to believe
I just say, come and follow me

Chorus
It?s not me that you need to believe
I just relay the message you need
Have faith in what you believe
He?ll come back for you and me.

Verse 3
As we walk along, one my stumble
Down the slippery slope, we all must slide
No one is immune, to the dangerous fall
We all come up, with bruises and scars
If we walk together, we can help
No one has to go, on by themselves
This little dirt path, is one long journey
We all will once stray from its path

It?s not me that you need to believe
I just relay the message you need
Have faith in what you believe
He?ll come back for you and me.

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thanks
stephen
#2
this is gone in to oblivion but i need it reviewed because i am thinking of using for an english assisgnment
thanks