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Hey guys I wrote this a few weeks ago, it gets some good responses at open mics so thought I'd see what you guys think

The best Day

(Verse)
It was the best day
The first time I saw your face
But then you went away
You were gone without a trace

(Pre-Chorus)
Wish I knew where you were going
Cos it's killing me not knowing
If I'll ever see your face
again

(Chorus)
Cos I cant remember
A thing Before that day
When you walked into my life
And then you just walked away
And even though your not here right now
It was the best day

(Verse)
It was the best day
the first time i saw your face
I started thinkin about
Our future, Our Lives
and our place

(Pre-Chorus)
But now its all gone
and I cant see
My future without you for me
If I never see your face
again

(Chorus)
Cos I cant remember
A thing before that day
when you walked into my life
and then you just walked away
and even though your nit here right now
it was the best day

(Interlude)
(Pre-chorus 1)
(Chorus)
hmmm... your ideas are interesting to me and i would like to subscribe to your newsletter - homer simpson