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Haven't posted anything in yonks. This isn't all that great - I like the end cos it gets less monotonous - added some harmonies and what not - so I say stick it out to the end before commenting as a whole heh.

Anyhoo happy to crit back as always - just link me to your masterpieces!

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Hope to hear something from someone soon.

Thanks!

Fatima

Forgot to mention! For those who know the song (it's amazing *sigh) it's not the whole thing because that would take me ages to do. It's just 4 of my favourite verses!
Last edited by fmq123 at May 12, 2006,