#1
Here's my latest work. I haven't posted here in a while to try to collect my thoughts. So here is what I think would be a good introduction to a song.

Crit for Crit
Attachments:
shining.zip
Quote by human-blasphamy
Didnt MCR do that song The Gay Parade It went like this
when I was A young boy
My father took me to the bedroom
and told me not to tell
#2
I really loved this introduction. It was catchy and the chords fit together so well, I mean wow. The choice of instuments was very well picked. Your percussion was kind of unordinary, but it fit nicely.

Crit my song in my signature
Last edited by BeatleLover1029 at May 12, 2006,
#3
Omg, I didn't expect that kind of response Cheers man, I feel pretty confident now :P

I'll check yours now.
Quote by human-blasphamy
Didnt MCR do that song The Gay Parade It went like this
when I was A young boy
My father took me to the bedroom
and told me not to tell