#1
this is a song a wrote a while back i just now decided i would show UG because i wanted to know what you guy thought of it its called LEAVING hope like the lyrics here they are

rap em up and lave em alone
say goodbye and hang-up the phone
operater said please speak at the tone
when she called and told me that the gig was postponed

i left the other day to see what she would say
whats the point in bein used
afterall ive got nothing to lose and im
tryin to make it all the way

whisper in my ear tell me what i want to hear
your disease is what gets me through
i'll think of the words to say while none will involve you
what else do you expect me to do

i left the other day to see what she would say
whats the point in bein used
she's drivin me crazy now so i dont know what to do
im so sick of the abuse

there it is please give comments this is the first song ive wrote hope you enjoyed
my dog looks like a lard
Last edited by myelbowspretty at May 12, 2006,
#3
The gig was postponed? No comprendo, muchacho.[/QUO

yea i found the first thing that rymed anything else!!! no im joking i get were your comin from
my dog looks like a lard