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Hey, this is my second song. Please crit it. Crit for crit, so don't hesitate critting this!

"Time Bomb"

My life just took a major crash
It hit a huge dead end
My soul is broken and it's thrashed
It's something that no one can mend
I just don't think that you care
Because you know that I love you
And you don't treat me very fair
You don't stop ...
You don't think...
You don't look around...
You just keep doing what you do

You lead me on
And then you shut me out
Like a dark time bomb
You'll do this
Without a doubt, yeah

You are like a loaded gun
Ready to fire
First you're with me,
then you're done
My need of you is way too dire
Is this just a game to you
Screwing with my heart and mind
Is this what you like to do
Making me virtually blind
Just put yourself in my shoes
Now I have just one question
How would you feel if it happened to you

You lead me on
And then you shut me out
Like a dark time bomb
You'll do this
Without a doubt, yeah

The only place I see you is my dreams
And when you're there, times are not the best
And even there, why are there no rainbow beams
Just darkness
Darkness falls on the two of us
And I just don't know why
You cause me so much pain...
And make me just want to die
Why does love hurt so much
Why do you leave me alone here
Why am I feeling just so hurt
This fake love takes from my life
All the cheer

You lead me on
And then you shut me out
Like a dark time bomb
You'll do this
Without a doubt, yea

Well it's time to say goodbye
And that I'll never be with you
So just forget about me
Just keep doing whatever you do
Just continue the crash
You can just smash my life
and take my empty heart
Just take it all apart
What will be the difference anyway


You lead me on
And then you shut me out
Like a dark time bomb
You'll do this
Without a doubt, yea