#2
I had your dmusic page saved in my favourites because your tracks were so good, I used to sing along to them as if they were perfect backings.

...Then today, I find that you've tried to sing over the top of them. I shan't forgive you. Ever.

But back to this song. As always, your tone's good, it's catchy, and it's well put together... But the chord progression is oh-so-overused. If you're going to use that, the vocal or lead guitar line needs to be something really special. I can't understand any of your lyrics either, because you're mumbling. Sing out, and try and keep on pitch!
#4
Quote by fuzzybunny
...Then today, I find that you've tried to sing over the top of them. I shan't forgive you. Ever.
Tried? :P I knoiw, I suck....
Yeah, I have to re-record the singing, take out the part with no guitar and turn it into a solo, and and put SYBIL on the vox....