I made up this riff this morning, i think it's pretty cool

I really want to record this song using my electric guitar, i think it would sound alot cooler... but i need to get a new patch chord. I also am writting lyrics to it so it wont just be a long ass jam, right now this is just an idea for a song. Just seeing if you guys think it sounds good or not

feedback would be appreciated.

I... like it! heh. the timing was a little bit off in some places, but that's not a big deal. you said you were gonna add lyrics, but I dunno... it doesn't really sound like a full song... with the lead, it sounds like a little part you'd hear after a second chorus or something, then at around 1:24, it goes back to the regular song.

but meh... that's just me.

oh and if you do this on electric, pleeeaaase don't kill it with super ultra mega metal distortion.
Banging on a trash can
Drumming on a street light