#1
Awaken

The concept of parents watching over their kids, brother over sister, friend over friend, boyfriend over girlfriend ; life experiences. Being the protective person when the person you?re protecting doesn?t like it. Coming to the window knowing your protector is there even though you cannot see them.

I know why you carry on
I know when it will be gone
I know why you hide in your bed
I know what?s inside of your head

Can?t get to sleep
Wake up, what will you see?

I know what this storm will do
I know what cloud will reign over you
I know why you?re up at night
I know what isn?t your delight

Chorus
Now are you awaken at night?
So just what gives you a fright?
Get outta bed
Now why have you come to the window?
So now what do you know?
Climb back in bed

I know what watches from the dark
I know if its in your heart
I know how long you will sleep
I know that you will see me

Chorus
Guitar solo
Chorus
#2
I like it, just had a go at playin a little tune for it, sounds good with a light tune on an acoustic, but yea good work
#3
Nice Work. Is the top in italics like a voice oevr during an intro, or is it just explaining to us the meaning to your song?

Also, it seems like you have a good setup to this song, about someone who is over protected and doesn;t appreciate it (i think?) Keep it up.
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Did you see what I did there? I made fun of his mom!
#4
The stuff in italic is an explaination, I'm doing that with all of my lyrics I'm posting for now on, so it's easier for people to understand.