#1
i decided to try an experimental jazz thing. it doesnt sound too bad, but some parts are kinda sloppy, but oh well, tell me what u think!!

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dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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#2
typing as i listen
starts good
ur right it does get kinda sloppy i think its mainly the drums
some places the guitar just doesnt sound right
and a little outta time
good ideas with this song
woah that 'shred' (or wateva) was way outta time
i think ur stuff sounds better slower and ur notes being held
the song kinda draws out in the end, gets kinda repetative
i like the endiing

good work! 8/10

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Oh, and azza, you're a pretty good writer! Graybass is a god amongst men and you're turning real quick to be his new messiah lol.

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You're doing good, mate.

Keep up the good work.

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