This is my newest song. Can't think of a title so can you help w/ that?? please crit.

Intro: Have you ever had a day
where everything went wrong
nothin went ok
and it seemed so long

Verse:you got hurt
by someone, you thought you knew
but it was because
you can't take a clue

Chorus: Everyone has days like this
when they never get a kiss
everything thats anything goes wrong
so you go home, and write a love song

and thats all that i have so far

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lol man plz dont take this the wrong way but you really cant rap.