#1
ok so this song means alot to me its a rough version of it right now with out any vocals just the basic guitars but i think i wanna add more guitar wise and oncei get the vocals i will post them. but here it is... crit for crit thanks in advanced

http://jcpalacios.dmusic.com/
anybody wanna put anything here just let me know
#2
hey man
really sweet guitar stuff
have u got tabs for it? if u do email me? tapdog_rules@hotmail.com
good chord progression
reminds me of hotel california
does kinda get a bit repetative with out vocals
i like the finger picking stuff
nice solo!!
oo wrong note there
but still really sweet
i like the ending nice effect

overall 8/10
needs vocals
good stuff
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#3
Hey Deff. thanks for the Crit Man.

I though it was pretty good. Some of your transitions between sections could be pulled off a little smoother/more subtle , though thats kind of a personal thing I guess. A think with lyrics this song would be really great...yeah it does sound kind of classic rockish...but kind of alternative at the same time...I would also go with 8/10

Deffinately repost when your done with it so we can see how it turns out..
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