#1
The ripcurls that ensue are worth it for you


She doesnt know this, but i dreamt of her last night
I dreamt we set sail on a hot air balloon trip to the stars
Speaking of stars, i want to pluck a few from this night's sky and replace them with her shining eyes

She doesnt know this, but Im missing her daily
I want to make her back straighten, neck extend, and eyes glow, like when she gets excited
and in more ways than others, I want her to experience heavy breathing, courtesy of my touch

She's on cloud nine floating on open air and ill be there waiting to catch her
when she falls, when she drops, when she takes the plunge
Ill be there even if breaking her fall breaks me, as long as she's ok
So im gonna take this little piece of what i have left of heaven and stash it away for next semester

Im not too sure about this, but I think she might have forgotten about me
Maybe I should return the favor and repress all our great memories past
but the thing is I love her company, I love her style, and I miss her scent on my bed

I haven't come to terms with this, but she's dating someone, whom she adores
So what's a guy full of feeling to do, besides withstand the ripcurls that ensue?
Should I be happy for her, or jealous, or mad at the world?
I wish i was a better best friend and could let this all be
Ive been wondering if she's deserving of this song,
but now Im thinkin im not derserving of her friendship

She's on cloud nine floating on open air and ill be there waiting to catch her
when she falls, when she drops, when she takes the plunge
Ill be there even if breaking her fall breaks me, as long as she's ok
So im gonna take this little piece of what i have left of heaven and stash it away for next semester
#5
I really really liked this. i like songs that tell stories =P


She doesnt know this, but i dreamt of her last night
this was a bloody good opening to the song, well done =)

My fave part was; She's on cloud nine floating on open air and ill be there waiting to catch her when she falls, when she drops, when she takes the plunge

Cuz it is very well written. The only part i disagee with is "for next semester" because i think that taking it away would make it alot stronger, and make it sound like a chorus.
All in all, very good, id give 7/10 =p
Crit the song in my sig please?? i need crits =/ xxx
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