#1
Stochastic

books burning
people raging
hearts breaking
mind racing
and something else
such thriftless expenditure
engine reving
baby crying
world turning
keep on trucking
a heretic would like to be
such tasteful herbage

shame to you
shame to the system
shame on me
what rhymes with system?

It wasnt like you care
wasnt like
gold is rare

(chorus)
what is it I exclaim?
nothing, nothing has to be
....what it seems
when I speak, do I speak?
does it really have meaning?
what is the meaning?

wheel spinning
club fisting
smoke wasting
youth tasting
you are naughty
blue hypocrite would say
clock falling
battery charging
Ion buzzing
mist choking
a euphious ring inside
such a deaf ear

shame to you
shame to the system
shame to me
antemortem

It wasnt like you inverted
wasnt like
jesus was perverted

(chorus)
what is it I exclaim?
nothing, nothing has to be
....what it seems
when I speak, do I speak?
does it really have meaning?
what is the meaning?
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#2
I like it. It seems like more of a poem than a song to me, but that being said, it is a good poem.

The 'what rhymes with system' thing sorta makes it less serious and a bit silly. Maybe

shame to you
shame to the system
shame on me
Chances come but i've missed them.

Or something may be a bit better.

I am dont know much about lyrics though.
#3
thanks....do you have any thing on here i could read?
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo