#1
Now throw them hands in the air,
Girl I know you feel fine.
Pierced lips, pierced clits, fake tits,
Chastity belts hanging from rafters,
Spazzed on the dance floor:
Mr. Hissy dancing with Ms. Fit

Holding, drinking, sucking water,
Holding plastic like liquor bottles,
"Move yo' body!
Move yo' body!
Make sure you don't hurt nobody!"

The whores and the babies never stood a fucking chance.
Dance dance dance dance, girl, too much booty in them pants, girl.
Smashing heads on railing.
Fucking guitar headstocks.
Legs broken back over their ears.
Chinese fingercuffed by security gaurds.
Jennifer Connolied on a couch.
Jared Leto-ed in an alley.
Vaccuming blow like methane.
Bleeding sick all over the sub-woofers.
Dance.
Poor advice.
#2
"Move yo' body!
Move yo' body!
Make sure you don't hurt nobody!"


class.
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#3
^thanks. this is a dance song i wrote for my band. we're playing it tomorrow at our next show. should be fun.
Poor advice.
#4
I'm rather nonplussed atm, but I will say that I like this piece and thought it was pretty original. I remember you from here a loooong way back, and it still seems that you have decent skill with words.

Good job and sorry for the sucky crit.

!troy!
#5
excellent! first dance song i've ever come across with lyrics like

Vaccuming blow like methane
Bleeding sick all over the sub-woofers
"Anytime but now
Anywhere but here
Anyone but me
I've got to think about my own life
The world is not our facility
We have a responsibility
To use our abilities to keep this place alive," said ian mackaye
#8
this is a pretty cool dance song...
i like... "Dance dance dance dance, girl, too much booty in them pants, girl." if it sounds the way i read it in my head, it should fit in pretty well... well, my apologies on not being able to think of anything else to say, but i hope this song goes well at the next show... catch ya...
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Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.