It sounds pretty good. I would say it sounds perfect for the start of a solo. Nothing really to improve on
Very nice Forbz, I like the main riff. I assume this is in D minor? You've got a great start methinks and it could turn out to be something really great. Although if you're going to be using Dm let's hear some tear jerking solos in there!
Keep up the great stuff man.
I like this, it's pretty much perfect as was said above, although IMO it seems a bit cluttered around halfway through the solo - this could just be due to midi style sounds though! I look forward to seeing how this comes out!
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Im diggin it, until around the 20 sec mark until the end, I didnt like that. other wise the rest was pretty cool, I liked the bass and the percussion was okay.

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