#1
I messed up setting up my first intro on this forum. so here it is agian

Guitar 1.

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Guitar 2.

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Crit my song Ignorance of the Safe
Ignorance of the Safe
#4
yep
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#5
Is that supposed to have a 'Wake Me Up When September Ends' feel to it? Coz it does, but besides that it ain't got that much going for it soz.

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#6
those guitars are def not going to harmonise, i guess its supposed to sound gothic and dischordant, and you piece apears to be in 3/4 time, which makes it sound quite weird.