#1
I've been reading alot of songs about, love won, love gone, and so on. This is a bit different. tell me what you think. Title may change.

Roads


I was sitting here down by the pier
Everybody?s in motion I?m looking at the ocean
Like a thousand diamonds shinning in my eyes
I sit here thinking of all the good times

Waking along these summer roads
Legends need a place to call home
Steel strings all doing what they are told
Yonder stories singing in different tones

They were traveling all across the land
songs would by playing guitars in hand
Turning on the volume set it loud
all the hands were flying up in the crowd

Some have passed on left all their songs
Leaving everything behind tested moments of their time
Going passed the boundaries their life?s full of mysteries
Rehearsals for the remaining for the tributes they?re playing

Still rocking on these summer roads
Festivals and concerts for thousands they hold
Turning points for music that was made
Daring convert in developed masquerade


They were traveling all across the land
songs would by playing guitars in hand
Turning on the volume set loud
all the hands were flying up in the crowd
#2
That was sort of written like an old song i read a fair while ago...interesting story. i do like this one though... & i dont think you have to change the heading... keep it up dude
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#3
i like it.. its def. different and its very creative but i think the word yonder is kinda out of place.. other than that its good and original.. good job could u crit my lyrics, highschool heartbreak or the untitled one ? thanks