#1
hm... this is my random song i wrote at 3 am on half a 26 of jim beam.
amen to that.

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pick pick pick up the phone why arent you answering?
you know know you know ive been calling
calling since i got home...

dont stop please just dont stop
all i've wanted is coming down now
dont you realize what youve done to me?
just turn, turn, turn it all around...

the job isnt done until one of us is gone
dont touch her, oh, she'll crush your bones
do you really hate me enough to make me feel pain?
or is it just a facade?
i hope its just a facade..

dont stop please just dont stop
all i've wanted is coming down now
dont you realize what youve done to me?
just turn, turn, turn it all around...

no no just let it go just let it fly let it be free
let let me go please just let me go
i wont bother you no more
i think its time for me to turn turn around
go back to the other side
where i didnt even know you

its pretty much impossible
almost incomprihensible
you think youll get your way
but i have already won.


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if you dont get it
too bad.
i hope they cannot see
the limitless potential
building inside of me
to murder everything
i hope they cannot see
i am the great destroyer
#2
nah, i get it. i like the way it all fitted in with the repititive words & all.... nice (sorry for the crap crit...)
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I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.
#3
thank you... i thought that repeating the words may bring some emphasis to those particular lines...

any more comments? i crit back.
i hope they cannot see
the limitless potential
building inside of me
to murder everything
i hope they cannot see
i am the great destroyer
#5
ahah, crit is just short for critique, dont worry about it

ahaha, im a weirdo. all my songs are completely different from what people are used to hearing lolol
i hope they cannot see
the limitless potential
building inside of me
to murder everything
i hope they cannot see
i am the great destroyer
#6
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i get it hey maybe u should add stuff personal like maybe say what inspires u to write and more pplz would "crit"