#1
Thats the band im in. i would really appriciate it if guys at UG would check us out and see what u think. We only have 2 songs on our site but we have Crazy Train and Master of Puppets finished but havent had time to recorded them but are planning on it in the near future. so check us out. any comments and/or feedback would be greatly appriciated. Listen to us at either

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=541882

Thanks
"Men profess to be lovers of music, but for the most part they give no evidence in their opinions and lives that they have heard it." ~Henry David Thoreau
#2
Will someone atleast give us some feedback. tell us what they like and what they dislike. its kinds hard to no what to work on when no one ever sends u any feedback.
"Men profess to be lovers of music, but for the most part they give no evidence in their opinions and lives that they have heard it." ~Henry David Thoreau
#3
I can hardly hear the guitar... at times he doesnt seem to know where he wants to go and the riff is repeating however the drumms are good.

there is potential... just think of the music you listen to and how it is formulated so there are individual parts like verse etc... and separate parts so they are clearly different.

crit for crit
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=363169
#5
Hello,

I think you have good potential. You seemed tight, but your songs sound rather repeditive, I think you need more breaks and changes to give it a more interesting form.

In saying that, your riffs were good. Like I say, you have potential but you need a bit more structure and direction, keep working on it!

Crit for Crit
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=363086
#6
yea im the rhythm guitarist for the band, and we were just improvising and thats why it gets repetitive. we are working on making the original sin on there into an actual song, and when we do that it wont be so repetitive. and if you cant hear the guitar too good its because we just stuck a mic in the middle of the room and pressed record. the same thing is with first take.
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