#1
hi thanx we gunna upload it to our myspace when uploadin is back up. please go hear our new song it on top called "rememberin what you said"


http://tjdd.dmusic.com/ thanx again also there a bunch of covers on there too feel free to listen to any. also our myspace addy is www.myspace.com/thewintersfall
2005 artcore
2004 epiphone les paul transparent blue
2005 agile dc 2500 trans black
washburn x-21
crate gtx 212 120 watt
behringer 2442 mixer
behringer ep2500 2400 watt poweramp
2 peavey dual 15 inch main speakers
Line6 PODXT Live
#2
The intro guitar has something wrong with the notes i just cant put my finger on it... i don't know why it annoys me.... it gets allot better though... the vocal part isn't loud enough.

34 seconds-- sounds great

End of first portion of lyrics, try yelling before the rest and you put the candle out... and build it up again.

I like the grunge style.

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#3
thanx for the reply i left a message about your song too thanx again
2005 artcore
2004 epiphone les paul transparent blue
2005 agile dc 2500 trans black
washburn x-21
crate gtx 212 120 watt
behringer 2442 mixer
behringer ep2500 2400 watt poweramp
2 peavey dual 15 inch main speakers
Line6 PODXT Live
#5
Judging from the comments I thought the intro would be out of tune or something. I thikn it's fine, there's a few notes a bit too early/late but other than that it's fine, reminds me of 70s/80s hard rock haha. Powerful, the chorus is cool too, the singing is quite energetic and flows nicely. Other than that I have been browsing UG and it's been nice background music, I particluarly like that solo in the verse. Are the drums fake? Cos they seem to clip/stop suddenly in places.

What did you use to record guitars? Very interested in this sorta stuff.

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#6
yes drums are fake hopefull this week we can get our drummer out and get a "real" recording done.. everything was running thru my podxt live even vocals and we used rifftracker to record. it has the "insta drummer". thanx for the kind words we happy when people like to listen to something we do.. i have to goto work now but i'll check out your song this afternoon. thanx again
2005 artcore
2004 epiphone les paul transparent blue
2005 agile dc 2500 trans black
washburn x-21
crate gtx 212 120 watt
behringer 2442 mixer
behringer ep2500 2400 watt poweramp
2 peavey dual 15 inch main speakers
Line6 PODXT Live
#7
Very solid feeling to this song. Like the sudden transition from chorus to verse. Nice lead. Solid drums. The vocals in the chorus sound bad because of the quality. They seem to crack, but im listening to the Lo-Fi version so take it for what its worth. Seems like a song Seether would do. Nice tone to the guitar IMO. Not sure how I feel about the end, if you let the drums drop out and just play the riff one more time I think thats sound pretty cool. Good work.