#3
i dunno, its a cool little..."piece" you could always you it as an intro to an epic song, or even an album lol
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#4
it's cool, but i would change those Em's to a different instrument or a higher pitch because as it is it sounds like a fart. good though.
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#5
Its pretty cool but the eight notes on the organ suck, and ending note sucked, lol

take those out fix some more parts, that u feel should be fixed, extend it and it will be nice.


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#6
Ah, yes yes... must have slipped my mind!

But, when I was listening to it, I realized that the lead was just some Christmas ...er X-Mas tune. Coincidentally, I have a black 12-string with snowflake inlays that I call Black Ice (and a dinky 'lectric dubbed "Colonel Cool" as well as my 6-string acoustic I call "Stumpy"). Well, with a sort of childish scary feel to a Christmas tune, I decided to finalize the name on this one after my 12-string.

I give you ... Black Ice...
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#8
I really don't see how it has a horror feel to it. Also it was kind of repetitive but it was overall a decent peice.