It's kind of cook, the background stuff is really cool in spots, like the wierd little chirp thing. The guitar strums in there are kind of lame IMO. I'd put in some trippy piano or organ or something. And keep the wierd noises the whole time. Get things a little bit more in time, and you'd have a sweet start to a song.
I'm not very active here on UG currently.
I'm a retired Supermod off to the greener pastures of the real world.
thanks for the crit. i dont have the original mix any more so i cant remix and recreate it . also i dont have a keyboard anymore.

thanks. yes its out of time. i dont want to re record it though. i like it disorganised. if i re do it. it just wont be the same. :P

im trying something new in a couple of days anyway. all i use is my electric guitar and my PC. that bass is my guitar transposed one octave lower!!! :P