#1
This is a tune I wrote out of being pissed off and very angry. I think it might go very well with a heavy ass rhythm behind it. Let me know what you guys think.
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Lives changed by decisions made
And I'm the only one who's to blame
If it makes you feel good baby
If it eases your pain then I'm the bastard
You can have your game

Come on and tell me what's the score
You've won I lost and you're still a *****
Selling your life for a gram of sweetness
A rock of crack an ounce of touching
And a bit of smack

Living on oblivious to what you've done
It's always my fault I'm always the one
You won't leave me alone and let me be free
From the constant head games you refuse to see
I forfeit this game

Come now tell me what's the score
You've won I lost and you're still a *****
Rape my soul and take my life
Take anything you want take anything you like
Just free me from my memory of you
And stop with all the lies
#2
Great! With some kick ass metal riff behind this could be quite a song. I would love to hear it recorded!
When I heard smoking would kill me, I bought shares in Dunhill and Marlboro - Thomas Geraghty

If we don't change it, nothing will fucking change.