#1
This is really different than anything I have ever written.. not that anyone knows how I write.. Just looking for a bit of feed back


Doctor.


67 lbs is the perfect weight
now doctor sweet doctor
lets set the date
for my breast enhancement.

My boobs disappeared
Through all of the years that I?ve starved myself.

I don?t understand it.

A doctor can?t heal a broken heart
We?ve been given these lives but don?t know where to start.

Pass me the ice cream there?s a hole in my soul I must fill
Oh doctor sweet doctor
Come on and sent me the bill
For my surgery

Cut away the pain that all of us see
But deep inside there?ll still be misery

I?m still empty.

A doctor can?t heal a broken heart
We?ve been given these lives but don?t know where to start?

When will we realize
It?s not in each other?s eyes
When will we see
Its ok just to be

Happy.

A doctor can?t heal a broken heart
We?ve been given these lives.. now lets start..

Living.
#2
not really my taste, but im sure ther will be suomeone out there who likes this type of thing
#4
I like it. Not that hard to imagine a tune behind it for me, something very soft and melodic. Probably in a relative Minor or something. I think it could come together quite nicely with the right chordal voicings and a sweet voice over top. The lyrics are good and the flow works. Good job. Keep it up.