#1
i have started writing some new lyrics for a song. and i just wanted to know what you guys think so far. they arent finished i still have to write some lyrics for the bridge and outro. but this is what i have so far. all suggestions, comments, opinions, ect. are greatly appreciated

incision

verse

you are the catalyst of this disaster
the avarice you posses, has caused this mess
the story is always changing, it's always a myth
just another grudge i will never let go of

pre-chorus
i know this is what you wanted
this isnt my cruelest intention

chorus

how do you expect me to take you back
you have murdered this soul
the soul of this machine

i wont give you another chance
survived through the storm once before
and now we're living with the incision inside us

verse

you are the creator of the catastrophe
the reflection in the mirror is so distorted
the true colors you show forever blind me
trust you have broken will never return

pre-chorus
chorus
Last edited by Rymaninthebox at May 25, 2006,
#2
I like it, couple spelling/grammer errors in there... always use a word editing program before using/posting lyrics... if you ask me.

Good stuff, what style is it?
#3
Quote by AccidentsHappen
I like it, couple spelling/grammer errors in there... always use a word editing program before using/posting lyrics... if you ask me.

Good stuff, what style is it?



haha yeah. i should get in the habit of that. glad you like it though. the style is hard rock