Crit for Good Crits

well heres a live recording but its what our first track for the Album will be like minus the vocals and drums

we are going to do a retake tommorow because we were just moving things around during this track and tweaking it sound. . . its really moreof a painin the ass the more complex the rig gets

if there is too much low end or whatever let me know, we already know the piano is too loud.
Last edited by silentdud at May 25, 2006,
Very beautiful song, I love the acoustic. The bass is good too, especially with the fact that I can actually hear it =D

Is this all meant to be one song? The part where it cuts out is kinda weird. Other than that, I guess it'd be nice to have some lead acoustic fills to blend in with the strummed acoustic chords. Not really much else to say except that this has a lot of potential

Crit for crit?