#1
This one came out pretty quickly and naturally.

Four Functions/Homecoming

Into the Jungle,
The outspoken introvert,
Self exploration,
Out in this wilderness,
And I know I?m not one to complain,
Hypocrisy makes fools of us all,
But you were never too clear with the how and the why,
And it left me wondering where.

Balancing the heart and the mind,
To control the outcomes,
Equal parts intuition and sensation,
To purge the function rankings,
And let us transcend.

Step through the persona,
Into the reality,
Sink through the mirror,
And face the fantasies,
?Cause when you returned I could see,
You seemed just a little bit hollow,
And to bring you back to our comfortable state,
We need to find the scars.

Templates; folding, disappear,
Model; submit, collapse with fear,
Example funnelled through this pipe,
So find a better archetype.

Balancing the heart and the mind,
To control the outcomes,
Equal parts intuition and sensation,
To purge the function rankings,
And let us transcend.

Vacant stare
Through the wall,
The man who watched
His hero fall.
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#2
Sorry to double post, but it slept onto the second page without a single crit. So, crit for crit, I guess?
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#3
This seems like the kind of piece that would be great with music, but only with music. The lyrics themselves possess nothing that grabs and holds my attention. Perhaps you're a more musical person than lyrical, and that's quite alright. It is in no way a bad piece, though.

8/10