#1
Ok here's the properly mixed version of a short instrumental I wrote/might further build upon.

http://hhm.dmusic.com

Untitled Acoustic Instrumental.

Leave crit links and I'll crit when i have the chance.
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#2
If it were me I'd EQ the lead acoustic a little bit more. Add some lo-mid and do a slight high cut.

But that's just me.

It sounds way better than the original unmixed.
#3
I love the tone of the lead acoustic. A few of the bends sounded a little weird to me.

It sounds awesome as a whole though, what are you gonna do with it?
#4
Probably gonna start making it into a full song later tonight. i've got some ideas of other parts etc.
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#8
*agreed*^ just a couple bends out, other than that I rather enjoyed it. Looking forward to hearing the final score
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#9
well, the tone's improved and the mix is better since last time. Sounds a whole lot better to me. Still a couple of off bends but its a lot better, sounds much more professional. Also, a lot better tone on both the lead and rhythm it seems. Kind of electro acoustic sounding.

Liked it, more this time then before,

crit mine back?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=364030