I actually kind of like your vocal style, kind of reminds me of the Meat Puppets, with the monotone-ish stuff. And the "Whoa-oh"s are awesome, ha.

As for the guitar playing, the tone on the solo-thing at the beginning sounds kinda lame, I'd rethink it. I liked the little things you added into the solo, whether it was conscious or not.

Overall, it's a pretty good cover, in my opinion.
you tell me who's better. i think good charlote are better than the bealtes but that's only because their lyrics mean more and they are better musicians.

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Listen to the song, this isn't no safe delicate song. Either put some energy into your vocals, or change the instrumental to match your more soft interpretation.
Don't take it bad eh, this song is a very hard one to sing. but since you played it lower ( I think ) it should be feasible, give it a try.
Guitar work was correct but personally I like to play it in a more brutal manner, but hey it's your style.
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