#1
comment please and a little advice would be nice

this is my first one, its the verse for a song i wrote

tuning- CGCfad

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|--0--3--0--5--0--6--0--3--0--5--0--6-5--|
|--0--3--0--5--0--6--0--3--0--5--0--6-5--|
|--0--3--0--5--0--6--0--3--0--5--0--6-5--|
*(8)(8)(8)(8)(8)(8)(8)(8)(8)(8)(8)(16)*

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(8)= 8th notes
(16)=16th notes

there it is comment please
#2
i just played it, not bad if ur going very heavy u know. personally not my style but its cool
#5
i can play that song and its like one of my favorites from them and believe me its no where near similar
#6
Honestly it sounds like a version of smoke on the water pedaled on the open power chord there
#7
This is boring and it sounds like every generic metalcore band riff. If you're going to make something up, try to make it at least somewhat original.

E/----------------/----------------/----------------/----------------/
B/----------------/----------------/----------------/----------------/
G/----------------/----------------/----------------/----------------/
D/----3-----5-----/6-----5-----3-5-/----3-----5---6-/----3-----5---6-/
A/----3-----5-----/6-----5-----3-5-/----3-----5---6-/----3-----5---6-/
D/00003-00005-0000/6-00005-00003-5-/00003-00005-006-/00003-00005-006-/

Oh really, it sounds nothing like the Beast and the Harlot?
I play guitar
#8
Not trying to be mean, but it's damn generic and boring. It has nothing original or interesting about it in my ears.
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#9
well it could still make it as a metal song

thats all they are pretty much :S just a few pinched harmonics here and there, a crazy solo and uve made it

oh and grow some sideburns