not bad....you should finish it
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pretty nice sir, you've got a great rock voice, as been said, should finish it. the only thing constructively i can criticise is in the chorus, i didnt like the chord stabs, then "there goes my hero" then another...you should let them ring out through the vocals, it will sound much richer. other than that, very good work boss, you seemed to have both the vocals and the guitar work down very well. get it finished!
I liked it. Very good. Your voice reminds of David John (silverchair). Do a silverchair cover and scream some. Oh, and the guitar was also spot on (as far as i'm concerned)
Loved that. awesome work! finish it, great song, nice guitar and you have a great voice, i will wait for the finished version!