#1
There is something living deep in side of me
something only I can see
There something living in my mind
something that I can't escape
something that I love to hate

My dark side
it won't stop haunting me
my worst side
it won't stop taunting me
my dark side
my worst side
why won't you die

There is something that is controling me
something that won't let me be
There is something nesting in my mind
something that I can't right
something that I love to fight

My dark side
it won't stop haunting me
my worst side
it won't stop taunting me
my dark side
my worst side
why won't you die

So I can stop living a lie
So I start living right
and regain my sight
to a world full of lies
that you put in my mind
that place you love to hide
that place you love to hide

My dark side
it won't stop haunting me
my worst side
it won't stop taunting me
my dark side
my worst side
why won't you die

My dark side
it won't stop haunting me
my worst side
it won't stop taunting me
my dark side
my worst side
why won't you die
why can't you die
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Wrote this a while ago when I became a christian and was frustrated that even though I felt like I different person, I was still doing these things that I hated. Comments please!
#3
if you want some critiques, you're going to have to critique other peoples work. don't bump your thread
i'll be back and i'll crit your song then.
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#4
I like this a lot.
Why?
I feel a lot of us, if not all, could definitely relate to this, I know I do.
Very nice, although in some parts it seems just a little cliche, but I wouldn't touch it.
"In a world full of lies"...that's about it.
Well, all in all, 9/10, good job.
Keep writing, I look forward to more from you!
Please crit mine?
"Intertwined".
Danke~

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