I think I've done this cover before, but I just redid it a couple days ago..

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Quote by GOD*OF*ROCK
lol man plz dont take this the wrong way but you really cant rap.
Oh gosh... Firstly, just get the guitar part right first. It ain't that hard, so make sure you know it inside out before you sing. Also, your vocals sound weak and nervous, probably because you don't know what you're playing on guitar. Learn the guitar part sometime, try again, Private Message me, and I'll listen again.
Quote by WlCmToTheJungle
if ur going to play some american idiot stuff heres the settings:

Master Volume : 0
i dunno about the rest
I agree with the upper post,, maybe record guitar first and the concentrate on singing after.. by the way,, dont now the song anyway, but it sounds like it could be a good song/melodi keep trying