#1
Verse
Sweet Friday, yay
Is the best day
Of all
I always have a ball
So I went and wrote this song
And when i'm done i'll go make a bong

Chorus
Dear sweet Friday
Won't you take me away
Take me to the best place
Where I can be in a daze
And think of my favorite waste

Verse
Sweet Friday, yay
Screw the math today
Run around like a maniac
So I can get smacked
By some girl
Who I think is just a bore

Chorus
Dear sweet Friday
Won't you take me away
Take me to the best place
Where I can be in a daze
And think of my favorite waste

Sweet Friday is day
Where people eat the hay
Sweet Friday is day
Where people eat the hay
Sweet Friday is day
Where people eat the hay
Sweet Friday is day
Where people eat the hay
#2
If it is a song it might not matter, but it is extremely not deep. However, I applaud your work for it's lack of seriousness (Is that a word?). Too many songs are too serious these days. Your humor is what makes me like this.

PS
I would try to make it a little more complicated, but I don't know how.
#3
yeah i think song deliver a happy kind of feeling.. but the first stanza seems to be forced rhyming
#4
Haha nice!
Cheers for humor, though not so much on some of the rhyming.
It made me chuckle, good job.
However, I agree with the others on saying the rhyming is a bit forced on the first stanza and that I might suggest adding to it to make it more complex.
Overall, nice! lol
Crit mine?
"Never-ending"
Thanks!

FinestImagery