It sounds good, but it is really boring. Add a rhythm guitar part. I have a part in my head that would make that piece so much better. Just need to add some intensity. I'll tell you what, I will add a rhytm part tomorrow so you see what I mean. I don't have my amp here right now, it's in my friends garage where we practice. Keep in touch with me. By the way, how long have you been playing? Where are you from?

I have been playing 3 years and live in Ohio.

Originally Posted by sadistic_monkey
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My Gear:
Ibanez Rg320DX (81/85)
Alvarez Classic Electric
B-52 AT-100
Roland Cube 15
Marshall Avt Cab
Crate Blue Voodoo Cab (V30's)