#1
The fertile minds say better abide
Keep your head low now watch them as they go
Passing by
Pushing life to its fullest potential

Its not you
So don?t feel bad when you don?t have your way
Because you wont
So try to find the biggest enterprise

the entrenched entrepreneurs
residents of their own establishments
shallow minds
creating jobs and discontent

sure we know
this is how the system passes time
but don?t we know?
our parting gift retirement is really meant for happiness we work our lives and analyze and realize it all comes down to this
#2
Loved the third stanza, and the last two of the fourth. Other than that, nothing really stood out for me as special. I don't know if it's just me, but I didn't get ny message or anyhting from that, perhaps you could explain it?

If you could take a moment to comment on "Tears as I Leave" it would be much appreciated. It can be found in my sig.