#1
I only have 2 songs on it right now, there not good copies, there roughs.

i like my star and i think it has potential and im gonna work on it some more and fix up the lyric mistakes make a second guitar and a bass....maybe drums

and i really dont like never going back but you tell me what you think

i'm actually 16 but my voice still hasnt cracked(late bloomer) but life must go on.

im showing these 2 songs for now, tell em what you think, should i keep trying to improve my star or move on?

thx for the crits!

lol i forgot to give the link! here it is: http://www.purevolume.com/blimpt
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#2
s'ok, maybe some use of multi tracking would help, on never going back the vocals are good and songwriting is good too! well done.
however my star im not keen on as the vocals tend to drone and some issues with the flow of the song due to the recording method.

keep trying some more songs


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#3
wait so your saying if i get better sound quality these songs are decent?
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#4
well?
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#5
yah k im gonna start recording again

ill re-post when theyre done
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#6
my star eats poop.... as for never going back, the song seems good, but the chorus' lyrics could use some work.. seems kinda grade school repetitive, you know? could use some synonims for like 'bold strides, and dont use the words 'look back' and 'never going back' in the same sentence, it sounds, as i said, repetitive, and you need something else there that rhymes instead. id focus on never going back, and add a lick or something, jeez...gl