#1
how many drinks do you need
to ignore your sensibility,
act on your feelings for me,
stand too close and kiss me on the cheeks?

the frayed and frazzled color scheme,
drunken philosophies,
the argument over the importance
of wish making
and the promise not to write this piece
to me, all mean nothing

so I kissed you, passive and passionately,
hands grabbing as if at golden rings
though I feel no need to possess your body
the way you do so many things.
it must be my high standards
(you guessed it)
that keep me distant from women
who spend half their lives in shopping centers.

oh well, no matter.

on the couch and front porch
your mouth was an open door
to a world I'm afraid of
and for
love dead like a crushed fly

for those of you who said you'd be interested in hearing my lyrics put to music- I started work on recording an album, if you get in touch with me pm or otherwise I'd be more than happy to fill you in
#5
oh it does, no worries. thanks guys.
love dead like a crushed fly

for those of you who said you'd be interested in hearing my lyrics put to music- I started work on recording an album, if you get in touch with me pm or otherwise I'd be more than happy to fill you in
#7
this is a nice piece with good lyrical imagery

the frayed and frazzled color scheme,
drunken philosophies,
the argument over the importance
of wish making
and the promise not to write this piece
to me, all mean nothing


for me this is the highlight, it is slightly wordy for my taste, but it creates many images in my head