heres a riff i made up...


its like a vh style riff i made up for my band, pretty simple, but i like how it sounds, any suggestions will be extrmely appreciated

well get a verse riff goin on ( i assume this is your chorus riff ) and then throw in a psycho solo, but only if it is as VH as you say.... but i just kinda jamed that and it sounds good ( i just made up my own rhythm) and maybe throw in sum hammers and pulls and fly around with sum open strings and it will be great!
ok, its faster, but the verse is just, a power chord on 5/7 while he sings...