#1
ok so here's a short little song i've been working on... it's called HEMATIC SUFFOCATION haha... yeah. tell me what you think! I will crit 4 crit!!1

http://legionsmetal.dmusic.com/


EDIT: I put up a new version of the song... I used Beatcraft as a drum machine this time and I took out the unneccisary repeats.. I think the sound quality is better as well.. so go check it out!
Last edited by legions at May 29, 2006,
#4
Quote by capt_dammit
love the beginning
vocals would be nice

here's a short riff i did RIFF


By the way, that's too heavey for being metal.
#5
yeah, i know that last riff carries on for far too long... but I kind of liked it that way for some reason. haha. yeah I know my tone sucks pretty bad.. but i mean, I used audacity. haha. I went and review capt_dammit's and SabertoothSheep's songs.. good work to both of you I guess.. haha.
#6
Sounds pretty good. Your pinch harmonics are a little weak and there were a few too many. Just clea it up a little. Very nice metal song though.

http://www.myspace.com/guitarwylde03
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#7
Quote by guitarwylde03
Sounds pretty good. Your pinch harmonics are a little weak and there were a few too many. Just clea it up a little. Very nice metal song though.

http://www.myspace.com/guitarwylde03



my pinch harmonics would be weak if there were any in the song. haha, I don't play ANY at all through the whole song.
#8
Quote by legions
my pinch harmonics would be weak if there were any in the song. haha, I don't play ANY at all through the whole song.


I must have listened to the wrong song. Let me try again.
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#9
Ok I got it now. Death metal huh. Pretty nice. Here's my death metal song, I think you'll like it. Me and my friends did it just to prove how stupid and easy it is to write a death metal song.

www.myspace.com/kasvy
Originally Posted by sadistic_monkey
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Ibanez Rg320DX (81/85)
Alvarez Classic Electric
B-52 AT-100
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Marshall Avt Cab
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#10
Quote by guitarwylde03
Ok I got it now. Death metal huh. Pretty nice. Here's my death metal song, I think you'll like it. Me and my friends did it just to prove how stupid and easy it is to write a death metal song.

www.myspace.com/kasvy


hahahaha I loved it man... yeah I know death metal IS easy to write, but it still takes the same amount of talent to pull it off as good as any other genre of music.. generally that is. so no need to hate on death metal.
#11
kinda gets old, and the drum machine, eh, other than that good job
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#12
not a huge death metal fan, but at least this spares me the indiscernable low growling.

Intro was cool, sampled from windows?

Beginning riff was awesome, I actually liked the rapid fire snares and double bass kicks, made it sound really frantic.

Slow sludgy riff was catchy too, nice panning of the guitars, but it was a bit repetitive, especially after it was slowed down. I think you should bring back that intro riff somewhere along the line if you want to make this a full song.

nice job, great riffs. Check out mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=362265
#13
haha yeah.. that WAS a sample from windows, I just thought it sounded cool at the beginning haha. but I think im gonna fix this song up, add more on to it and add some more riffs and stuff, because it was just a little test right now... and when I do it over, it will be mixed a lot better.
#14
you kind of got a slipknot tone going on there
slipknot tone=crap